Like a midget covered in sugar, I'm hoping this is short and sweet.
SCENE. EXT. STREET. DAY
A man is walking down the street in heavy rain. The man looks angry.
MAN
(Under his breathe)
I don’t bloody believe this
Shots of the MAN getting continuingly wetter.
CUT TO:
The MAN walking into a leisure centre.
MAN
One adult for swimming please!
END
I think I'd prefer the midget covered in sugar.
It was okay Paul, that's about all I can think of to say.
I'd prefer the man lifting the midget to the swimming pool..then being
refused until he'd had a shower because of all that blasted suger..those pesky
swimming pool rules
I thought it was ok, too.
The first time I just 'read it' the second time I imagined it very clearly and it was much funnier.
It's one of those sketches that if you had a show would get in as a bit of padding, I think.
So I give it an okay but on the good side, if that makes any sense.
hardly a sketch to be laughing out loud at, I was bored and just wrote it into the box... because it was raining outside... see what I did there? 
Thanks for the feedback guys