Help needed on this one - Driven to distraction Page 2

If you want my twopenny worth I think you have one REALLY strong idea in the suicidee who doesn't want anything too nasty - looking for a 'fluffy' way out as it were.
BUT I think it gets lost in a rather overlong piece that drifts.
I think the bold call is to go back to that one idea and think of the best way of wringing the comedy out of it. That might mean dumping the gun shop, bank etc all together. Sometimes you have to kill your babies.
Hope this doesn't stop you voting for my next sketch !!

Nice idea Frankie. I like all the alternatives offered. Seeing as the Bank is driving customers to suicide, after the traditional suicide methods have been explored, they could simply offer a credit card with a crippling interest rate. Guaranteed to push you over the edge with an income of less than 12k a year. Or suicide by instalments. Every month you have a limb removed. Or maybe not!

Thank you guys .. I really do appreciate your comments and suggestions as this sketch has "Driven me to distraction"...

Mr(s) Lazzard - I voted for your sketches mate because they tickled me the most on all points ... you'll get another vote from me if ya can do it again!!! I really do read long and hard before I vote (believe it or not - YOU should believe it!!! )

Hatx

I mean we've all tried it at some point haven't we?

Haven't we?

Well now, my own bank has certainly tried to drive me to suicide... it sure feels that way anyway... ouch!

So did mine, they offered me a noose with my new credit card.