Quote: El Hutcho @ 21st February 2020, 2:23 PM
Oh, go on then. First time I tried this, so they're probably a bit rough and ready, but here we go:
Breaking News:
1. Israeli soldiers have been duped into downloading security busting software by Hamas operatives posing as young women seeking attention.
The Israeli military have shut the services down but did express surprise their trained troops were caught out by apps named "Palestinder", "Gaza Strippers" and "Best W**k"
2. Storm Ciara has uncovered a 130m year old dinosaur footprint on a beach on the Isle of Wight. One archaeologist commented, "This has given us a fascinating insight into what Britain was like
many many years ago," after visiting a local shop to buy their lunch.
3. The 35th anniversary of Eastenders is to be celebrated this week with the death of a prominent character on a Thames boat trip. When asked who she thought the victim might be, ex cast member Anita Dobson was tight-lipped, telling our reporter "Anyone can fall in, love."
Good week/ Bad week
It has been a bad week for those in their early twenties who weren't given the MMR vaccine, as rates of Mumps infections have reached their highest levels in ten years.
However it has been a good week, strangely, for retailer Fat Face.
I wondered if the Isle of Wight one would offend, and if the mumps one was a bit sick, but went for them anyway,
Isle of Wight one is fine; it's known as a traditional, old-fashioned place to live and holiday (having been there). I would maybe reword it and I don't think you need the last bit about shop but I like the joke. Mumps one is fine and not too sick (unlike the mumps sufferers) in my opinion. You could maybe hone it - take off vaccine and maybe put - As rates of mumps are at their highest. The Anita Dobson one is clever. I feel the show missed a trick there. I think it could be a generation thing - possibly the producers aren't familiar with her and missed the reference. Hard to tell.
Quote: skram @ 22nd February 2020, 9:19 AM
Always a bit wary of posting sketches but here goes as I was pretty happy with this one. I try to tick the obvious boxes when coming up with sketches, ie. recent news story, try to integrate/include a second news story, preferably an opportunity for impressions, every line a setup or joke, more than 2 voices if possible, an actual ending/punchline.... happy to get feedback on where I might be falling short:
INTRO: This week the government confirmed that it was carrying on regardless with HS2 - yes that really does sound like a Carry On film, that's probably where they get half their ideas from. But with the project already running massively over-budget and behind schedule, the question remains how will they fund this hole in the government's finances ahead of the budget?
FX/GRAMS - DRAGONS DEN
EVAN DAVIS: Next up into The Den are London pair Boris Johnson and Rishi Sunak who think they've come up with an ingenious solution to bridge the north-south divide.
BORIS JOHNSON: Well, hello Dragons, indeed, my name is Boris Johnson if you will.
RISHI SUNAK: So I must be Rishi Sunak. (ASIDE) Who knew this is what I sound like?!
BORIS JOHNSON: Today, as it were, we are looking for an investment of 55 billion of our Queen's great pounds for a 50% stake in HS2. I thank you.
EVAN DAVIS: The record investment wipes the smug grins off the faces of the Dragons, who suddenly realise they're not quite so minted after all. First to question them is seasoned Dragon, Deborah Meaden.
DEBORAH MEADEN: Look, Boris, first of all stop playing with your hair and stand still. Now, what about patents?
BORIS JOHNSON: Well it is patently obvious, I should think, that this is a fantastic investment opportunity.
DEBORAH MEADEN: See, you've got me worried now Boris, because you obviously think this is a good idea. Therefore I won't be investing, I'm out.
BORIS JOHNSON: Bugger.
EVAN DAVIES: Will Touker Suleyman break with tradition and consider any investment that doesn't involve cravats or handkerchiefs?
TOUKER SULEYMAN: No, I'm out.
BORIS JOHNSON: Well, ha, hmmm.
PETER JONES: Hi guys, I'm Peter Jones. Yes THE Peter Jones, do you recognise me? Aren't I handsome? Look at my teeth when I smile.
BORIS JOHNSON: Marvellous, Peter, they look like shiny pearls of wisdom, as white as a Tory constituency, spewing forth such financial prescience from the cavernous jaws of a God-like behemoth that I cannot comprehend.
PETER JONES: I certainly can't disagree with any of that, however your trains aren't remote-controlled, so I'm out.
EVAN DAVIES: It's another blow for the Prime Minister that has left him looking like he's been dragged through a hedge backwards. Can Tej Lalvani throw him a lifeline?
TEJ LALVANI: Guys, let me tell you where I'm at. I've not actually listened to a word you've said, I've just been sat here stroking my pile of cash admiring how rich I am. I'm out.
EVAN DAVIES: The desperate pair's hopes now rest with the final Dragon, Sara Davies.
SARA DAVIES: OK, look right - I'm a northern lass, I think I can see how this could help the economy up north.
BORIS JOHNSON: You can? Fantastic, would you mind explaining it to us because we don't have a clue, do we Rishi?
SARA DAVIES: Look, you're after a lot of money, £55 billion - I could buy a flat in London for that. But I'll make you an offer... do you wanna go and talk to the wall?
BORIS JOHNSON: Absolutely, 55 billion percent. So what is your offer then?
SARA DAVIES: Howay man, that was the offer, go stand in the corner - I'm sick of the sight of your face man! I'm out!
BORIS JOHNSON: Bugger, I knew we should have gone for a Chinese Dragon instead. Rishi, have you still got the number for Huawei?
END
That is a good sketch. I wonder if the number of voices may have made it a bit too much of a challenge so they went for an easier one. Also they would need 7 recognisable impersonations. I see why you had 4 dragons. Maybe could have just had Boris doing it and not Rishi too, just to cut out one extra voice. You had to have four as it is Dragons Den and would look odd otherwise and you needed Ewan to introduce them. Could maybe cut down Ewan's words a bit. Still it is very good.