Yes DaButt and Kenneth, I think the subtitles are useful and I suppose it does help with the Welsh accent just incase
With the ending for this one I agree, I was stuck on how to end it. I wanted some sort of call to action or a strapline but all the ones I came up with I didn't like or were too long, the Jehova Witness bit was something that came to me and I had enough by then and used it. Thanks for the feedback, I always take it on board.