Spaniel at The Academy of Words

Here is a sketch we recently filmed involving the disappearance of the letter 'P' from the Academy of Words. https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=sYQ5TPAiMIA

Hah off note subgestional at right points
Finally a youtube poster that hits the right points
Half par talking mr bean impressive very good timing

Very impressive

Some nice subconciuos hits there very impressive

Absolutly brilliant blown away!!!!

I mean u got subconcious dead pan hits every wer
" we snuck in lol"
U also hav visual dead pan non logical comintaor this is brilliant

No logic to conclusion timed very well timed this is i really cant fault this at any way or form

I would watch this on tv

Finally a bar been set well done

Who wrote this?

Moderators get this group on front page how exciting to see a gem like this

I want this on front page of website

You guys gonna be rich with right exposure
And im a damn hard critic

U need a different name though something weird
Like
The blonde men

Something not logical

Yes yes
Its wierd makes people think
"The blonde men"

Spaniel is to objective

Change ur name to

The blonde men

Its weird and good

Otterfox - funny and unique as always.

The acting was pretty interesting. Maybe you could take the wackiness of your video further, by having armed guards surrounding the academy. You could also have burglars in stripey white and black suits lurking about with letters in their pockets or something. Just so you get the most out of your ideas. This was good, though.

Dare I say, too long?

Quote: Lazzard @ 10th November 2017, 3:27 PM

Dare I say, too long?

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Nope dopime was startin to set in
Then bang the bushes joke

No no who ever is writing this knows what there doing

Quote: comedywriter dude @ 10th November 2017, 3:37 PM

Nope dopime was startin to set in
Then bang the bushes joke

No no who ever is writing this knows what there doing

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I stand corrected.
Perfect length.

We got about five hits from the start vidualisation subconcious hits
Bang the bushes joke great delivery impressive

We also seem to have a host that eyes arnt dialated unlike monty python all stoned delivery is very good and sharp and witty
But deadpan in there it sems to be seinfeld cross monty python

I have not seen anything like it

Thanks for the feedback. I'm glad it's positive for the most part. Lazzard - self editing wouldn't be my strongest point so I take your point on board about the length. We had a nice scene in the building too which I thought would be nice and have a greater variety in terms of locations but the sound never recorded. Luckily we filmed it outside too. Thanks for all the feedback. It's much appreciated.

Loved the bit about asking the Professor questions from inside, the bush too far away for him to hear properly; and also the line 'let got of that part of me' at the end. The stuff at the beginning, with the reporter insisting he's 'here', is very reminiscent of some of Eric Idle's gags in 'The Rutles'.