So i havn't actually seen anybody say they hate the joke,
I guess one thing i don't do is ask for advice. The hate has already let fly, okay so hate fore me has let fly
One thing i should probably do is say,
1 did you like the joke
2 improvments
I been working on this joke for a long time
theres no point in posting argumentive comments thats already let fly
I want to hear for once i no ( what am i changing or something lol)
no.1 did you like the joke
no.2 is it close has potential
no.3 whats wrong with the joke that you didnt like
no.4 you liked the joke but you just dont like me ( no.4 is important you might not like me but you might like the joke this is what i really want to know)
first time asking advice ha ha, yer i'm a tripper. so put that out the window,
for example i already no i'm an over confident person and arrogent. I'm asking to put aside and asking for comment
actually i might add this because i want to be original
no.5 have you ever heard any form of this joke before, if so please explain as i want to be original
So its complety an answer you caqn answer it then call me something or whatever
example its a good joke has potential but your hopelss not smart
put me aside put your comment on joke first and then if you wish at end attack all you wish ( oh and i wont attack back this time, though i think some want to see my back tacking ability see me this is being over confident again lol)
I'm asking for once put aside me i want to know what you think of the joke