Out of It - A Comedy webseries

Heya,

Here's a link to the pilot for a comedy webseries we wrote called 'Out of It'.

https://vimeo.com/outofit

It's about three women, about to hit thirty, who go back to their old student bar. The whole series follows them through the highs and lows of one boozy night.

We really wanted to change the perception of women in comedy and on screen. Whilst women are better represented in comedy, there's still such an emphasis on shaming or objectification in a lot of it. We really wanted to give a different but honest portrayal of how women we know act on a night out.

See what you think. All feedback welcome.

Best,
Stella Delicado and Tim McNiven

I thought this came across as more of a drama than a comedy. I thought your script was realistic, but I found it a bit dull. Maybe it was too realistic, some more action would be appreciated. I wanted the actors to lighten up a bit, as I found watching this a bit depressing. On the plus side the acting was pretty good. I've seen worse dramas on TV, so who knows, maybe this could be successful....