Hi All
It'd be great if anyone watches this: https://youtu.be/0rWD72Qdz4s and offers their thoughts and criticisms.
Feel free to comment on the script, drawings, animation, sound, acting and whatever else.
EDIT -- Some people may find the cartoon offensive so if you're easily offended it may be better not to watch.
Best Wishes
Yacob
I really liked it but...you might want to warn people it might offend.
Probably the best thing I've ever seen in Critique/Showcase. Well done.
Thanks Playfull! I've added a little note to the introductory post to give a warning that it's offensive. I may add a warning to the youtube description too.
Thanks Don Rushmore and Gappy! Very nice of you both.
I enjoyed that very much.
Hey Yacob. That was funny and sick in equal measure. But I am sick so funny wins.
Thanks Carlos and Will!
Wish I had fixed some of the animation. Particularly the guy's arm when he brings the card down (it's too jumpy) and I forgot to add the D to the card when the guy heads towards the door. Darn.