How can I be funnier?

Hi, Im Kevin! Im currently living in Vancouver and starting to make comedic short films. I really enjoy British humour and was wondering if anyone could help me out by analyzing my first short film on YouTube called "Pizza Palooza".

Shot in actual Pizza Restaraunt, Pizza Palooza is what I hope is a great start to a short film making career. Inspired by my favourite British Comedies as well as American comedians: The Lonely Island.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bLVq_-Yt4YY

Thank You! Please Let me know what you think!

Well, when I want pizza comedy, I watch the great Australian show Fat Pizza, full of ethnic stereotypes: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YdzEwa_bHf0

Quote: kev jod @ 18th July 2016, 2:51 AM BST

Pizza Palooza is what I hope is a great start to a short film making career.

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Now that's funny.

Regarding the film, I would like to see improved acting, production, and writing. Good luck.

Quote: Nogget @ 18th July 2016, 6:20 AM BST

Now that's funny.

Regarding the film, I would like to see improved acting, production, and writing. Good luck.

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Seems easy enough. Thanks for watching!

Kev,

Everybody except my mom said my stuff wasn't funny. So I applied common sense, scientific analysis and consulted all manner of founts of knowledge and I of course came to realise that mom knew best.

Hope this helps.

F

Quote: Frankie Rage @ 18th July 2016, 2:10 PM BST

Kev,

Everybody except my mom said my stuff wasn't funny. So I applied common sense, scientific analysis and consulted all manner of founts of knowledge and I of course came to realise that mom knew best.

Hope this helps.

F

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Thanks!