Yeah, it probably could be tightened up a bit; but glad you liked it.
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I loved the original script and like the animation. I haven't heard it yet as no audio at work but I'll make a point of listening at home.
I shall return..
Sad old Frankie working Sunday night when he'd rather be at home writing, filming, etc.
EDIT: I've heard it now, excellent mate, really enjoyed it, didn't seem too long to me! If I had final edit I can't see anything to change?
I really enjoyed it and loved the voices...they added to it! Perfect!
t'was great - your voice acting and timing especially - you should, if you haven't, check out some of David Firth's stuff - think you'd like it.
Cheers all, and Ill make sure to take a peek at firths stuff Nick.
EDIT: Just put his name into google and realised hes the fat pie guy, yeah, his stuffs great.
Fantastic once again Matt. I am not worthy.
Really enjoyed it: made me laugh, nicely acted, I really like the idea.
Mr. Mantis' voice made me laugh by itself!
I'm only on dial up at present so I haven't seen this yet but I know I'll like it because I remember guffawing at the script. Great work.
I like the animation, it looks cool.
I wasn't that excited about the script, it was a bit slow but there were bits I liked.
good work fella