Craig Thomas
Thursday 31st December 2015 3:38pm
London
34 posts
I don't know if it might work better then other way around?
ie, something like:
INT. TANNING SALON - DAY
A peroxide blonde lies in a tanning booth, basked in the glow of the UV light.
The light intensifies, her skins begins to smoulder. The smoke gets thicker.
Suddenly, she BURSTS INTO FLAMES. We zoom out and see we are actually in -
INT. CHURCH - CONTINUOUS
Through the thick black smoke we see the pew, the vicar, crucified Christ.
Moving back, we see the first row of the congregation, all dressed in black.
From the front, we see everyone is dressed in black, many crying.
MOURNER
tearfully)
It's what she would have wanted.
Obviously, that was written very quickly, but might be another way to approach the same scene?