Wow that was a thoroughly enjoyable piece of writing. At times there was something almost poetic about the rhythm, which contrasts nicely with the sometimes slightly dry humour.
I also have to say I am very interested in the format you have created. It is a nice idea to tell a stroy bit by bit. It is like a modern day version of the old penny dreadfuls isn't it? (Is that the right term?)
I have toyed with the idea of creating a blog myself but I have always been unsure what to write about. The idea of writing fiction never occured to me.
If you don't minf me asking, what are the benefits of using something like wordpress to the providers that charge a little each month like this one to create a blog:
http://www.1and1.com/create-a-blog
I look forward to continue reading Breeze's story.
Keep up the good work!