Obviously #nsfw.
The humour in this is dark but silly, so if that's not your cup of tea you have been warned. I hope people like it.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0GKsPaYs-f8
thanks
shane
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Ok as you know I'm a fan, great character, good compact script.
But isn't it time to do something new.
Why not see if you can make the story longer and more detailed, say 10 minutes then 20 minutes etc.
Build in stuff like a broken narrative, or just a developing one where we see your character maybe starting anti porn, then admiting their addiction.
Thanks! I get what you are saying. This video was more about developing my character from a 'Stumbling Idiot' into an actual character. I'm not sure it's there yet but I feel it's evolving - subtly.
I would love to do longer form videos, it is definitely something I am hoping to do someday, but at the moment I am just trying to learn the craft of writing, editing and acting.As I am a complete amateur, I think it's better to do it with smaller projects first.
I have done other very short ones without this 'Idiot' character. Some more successful than others. As I say I'm just trying to learn at the moment.
Offended: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L93vxGbhXbg Headphones In Nose: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ixM_UiHfk58 Magic Trick: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yu32dyRyd_A
Thanks for your feedback though. Much appreciated
Shane
Well Shane you're learning well, it's a good character.
But don't spend too much perfecting that which you know already.
I've a challenge for you.
Don't film the next one, write it. Aim for say 1000-1500 words.
I reckon it'll be as funny.