British Comedy Guide

Comedian Juliette Burton is SuperMum

Every kid thinks their mum is a superhero but what if she actually was?

SuperMum is a 3 min short comedy film starring Juliette Burton and written and directed by Lisa Gifford (award-winning creator of 3some).

Juliette Burton's comedy shows have got 5 star ratings - she performs in Brighton at the Komedia this week and at Leicester Square Theatre later this month.

Lisa Gifford's comedy drama series 3some has won many international awards.

Hope you can take a watch at the link provided and if it makes you smile enough please consider voting for it - the vote button is just below the player. Thanks

http://www.rode.com/myrodereel/watch/entry/284

Look forward to reading your thoughts/reviews.

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It's a great idea, but why on earth did you choose to do it as a moc doc?
The most reviled and cliched format around.

Also it's kinda confused.

The joke about the superhero using their powers to viciously and the female superhero everyone lost interest in when they had kids.
Are two different jokes that kind of get in each other's way.

Your performance is nice, the script is breezy with some good jokes and it's well filmed.

But if you want feedback. I'd lose the moc doc completely and make the joke that she's a conventional super powered, competent super heroine.

Who gets gradually more pissed off that people keep asking about her family and not taking her seriously.

Maybe ending up with a massive rant that no one thinks Batman and Robin are dodgy?

Also it does kinda just end. I mean how about her ex is a super villain? Or just an ordinary bloke driven mad by being divorced he thinks he's a super villain?

"Keys your car man!" or "Dr Cancel Contact visit!"

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