Could everyone be amazing and leave a list the positives and negatives for this video please, thankyou very much:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kfrnSqNxrbQ
This is for a mini biography, so the more professional the reviews the better. Ideally 3 positives (if any) and 3 negatives, thankyou!
Also, I apologise for posing this link gain, I cannot delete the previous thread.
Asking for favourable reviews is a bit gauche around here, mostly people are looking for feedback.
Why not try Facebook or Chortle.
Except Chortle isn't as firendly....
Yes, this sounds a little too much like homework.
Why ten reviews?
Why three good, three bad points?
One seems to be given minimum standards for something which is actually a free favour.
I would just like to know how to further improve my technique, as well as gain the knowledge as to what I am currently good at.
Feedbacks one thing, reviews another.
You need to post more stuff (just text is fine) and give feedback to other writers.
Takes a while.