hiya.
I'm trying to do one of those gag-a-day webcomics, I'd love you guys to check it out.
Feel free to shout at me if you think it's shit:
crimefightingpigeonandmouse.webcomic.ws/comics/1/
Arron
Daily(ish) webcomic
Can I moan at you that your link doesn't work?
The jokes are pretty damn good but the characters and environment have nothing to do with what they're talking about. I'm not a fan of "being random" if that's what you're going for (it's too easy to be random). Also I'd like a bit more variation in the look of the strips - it'd make them a bit more interesting.
But yes, good jokes!
the jokes are excellent but I agree shake up the appearance a little
seriously good jokes though
Nice work, Arron.
My favourite is #5: http://crimefightingpigeonandmouse.webcomic.ws/comics/5/
(Fellow forum users, for a list of the cartoons in question, please see the Archive page below
http://crimefightingpigeonandmouse.webcomic.ws/archive/
- Gusto
Nice characters, but it'd be better if you didn't just repeat each frame. Try using a bit of close-up.