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A Knock Knock Joke (Quick Cartoon)

Hey All

Thought I'd post in Showcase instead of critique this time. I'm unlikely to change this version but feel free to critique it none the less (thoughts on the script, look, acting, sound, etc are all welcome).

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QVe2UI1ph3k

Best Wishes
Yacob

You're animation is really smooth and nice too watch

Cheers Sootyl! Not sure if people are going to like the joke in the animation :) (it's just one of those things I felt like making) but happy that it looks OK.

I agree with Sooty, the facial movement on your animations nowadays is really good, and easy to watch. You get strong character in the faces and voices too.

The joke is dumb, but it's the sort of thing I like.

Pedant's note, though: I'm not sure an absence of climax is the same as an anti-climax, strictly speaking. If he'd said "Anticlimax...Jones!" that might have worked.

Thanks Gappy. I am ALL about dumb jokes :)

I'm pretty sure a lack of a climax can be a classed as an anti-climax. Though, technically, something did happen as a 'climax', only in this case that something was 'nothing' :).

I've been having a think, and I can't come up with anything other than anti-climax that would work, so please ignore my nit-picking. ;)

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