Bit of in character stand up I performed at The Rivera Fringe Festival (yeah that well known festival) last year. I perform the character at a comedy club regularly in Devon for a bit of fun, introduced Arthur Smith in February too which was a laugh. Like I say he's just a character I do for fun.
The Comedy Inspector Live at The Blue Walnut
If you want some advice, it's a nice actorly performance.
And the character is a neat idea.
But your jokes are so damned old they read the Daily Mail and think Nigel Farrage is a nice young man.
And your performance is a bit too mannered and rehearsed there's no spontaneity in it.