COP: Sir, step out of the car.
GUY: What?
COP: [Flashes badge]
GUY: [Getting out of car] This is bullshit.
[COPS KID GETS IN BUMPER CAR]
COP: Sir, step out of the car.
GUY: What?
COP: [Flashes badge]
GUY: [Getting out of car] This is bullshit.
[COPS KID GETS IN BUMPER CAR]
That's neat and a nice joke
But for 2 things, the directions seemed a little unclear
Also I think the kid could get much more Dog Day Afternoon pissed about things
(and maybe we don't see it's a kid till they get out?)
nb what do you do with your sketches?
I just mainly post them on Twitter, hence how short they are, but I agree, could be expanded on and the reveal be even better.