I also did a platform quickie sketch for the sketch factor competition. Didn't get through. I wondered what people thought of it.
PLATFORM QUICKIE
FX PLATFORM TANNOY BONG
PLATFORM ANNO (D) This is the ambiguous train announcement. The train to London Victoria is delayed because of silliness.
(D) means the voice will be distorted to sound like a platform announcement
alright, again ive said it before, i think it was hard to write a bad one of these
Sorry, Mystergeneral, but I really didn't get that at all. More odd than funny!
I laughed at this, but I have no idea why. The more I analyse it the more worried I am about myself.
Well the word ambiguous means.....don't worry about it. You probably didn't find it funny, cos it wasn't. There is no other reason why i didn't get to the second round