I've made a short black and white film.
Any feedback appreciated cheers
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C5vTfc8e7aE&list=UUBuEiuhctJ6nivMb7fz-UPQ
Short Silent comedy slapstick. Feedback appreciate
Hi looked like you had fun. Will watch it all when I get a chance,
But
Get to the film if it is a short nobody wants to watch all those credits at the beginning, tad on the self indulgent, Sorry... stick them at the end.
Move the camera around. It's too static. Have different shots for the same set up wide close medium etc and like I say move the camera.
Also film effect the video rather than just have it in B&W
Trim it down, just watched the beginning so far but cut cut cut... for pace!
well done for posting it up and hope my points are useful rather than annoying!
I agree about the credits, 42 seconds of a 7 minute video is a big ratio. Put them at the end at least.
Hi guys cheers for watching/feedback both of you are spot on and will help me outa lot for the next one.
Thanks 