So I've written this play...thought I'd share the first scene where Angela Merkel discovers the identity of her new chauffeur
Be as rude as you like...
Mein Kampervan
I quite like the premise.
But can't help thinking the one-sided telephone conversation is a bit clumsy.
The blundering scientist having to explain to his Chancellor why the freezer got left open and what Hitler wants to do would make for better theatre.
But that's a creative choice - and that's up to you!
Good luck with pulling this together.
The German accent is quite to hear.
Also it seems terribly dated, subject material...Angela Merkel is a Nazi and she's driving Hitler around Europe. It's all a bit 1970s clumsy sitcom.
Thanks for taking the trouble to respond. If we all liked the same things life would be very boring.
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