INT. COUPLE SAT ON A SOFA.
HUSBAND:
It was a brilliant wedding, fantastic honeymoon and your family have been wonderful.. but when are you going home?
Another long sketch! - Newly Wedded Bliss!
A little wordy I think - could lose the 'but' perhaps.
I feel that the 'but' adds a certain je ne sais twat?
If you wanted to inject a bit of romance into it suppose at the end you could write "but when are you going to suck my cough sweet"