At Wits End (short film)

Hello

Made a short film which am hoping to turn it into a web series,
So any thoughts or critique would be welcomed.

Link to film http://youtu.be/5tf4ObIkNP4

thanks in advance

Not that it can't ever be done again, but this is just so incredibly similar to peep show.

The writing was pretty basic and really unnatural. Acting was far from great.

But despite all that, I'm sure you can gradually improve it, I think you just need to find your own direction.