Hi, I've been putting together some podcasts, which I'm hoping are funny, though would love any pointers or advice.
It's taken me a while between the two I've done, but I'm hoping to start turning out some material at a faster rate.
Let me know what you think.
https://soundcloud.com/terrible-words
Thanks,
Sam
Ok I listened for the first few minutes, sorry it would have to be a lot better to beat the 5 minute barrier with me.
First of all the good, it's very crisp and easy to hear you have an engaging and clear tone.
I like the surrealism, the man who remembers life before birth, meeting him in a dream etc.
But now the bad.
It's buried in tonnes of verbage and exposition, anything that isn't funny or advancing the plot needs to go. Andthat's three quarters of it, also you're just filling. Also you're just telling us the story, I don't get a feeling of you as a character. The narrator should be a character, so be one.
Well that's 8 minutes of my life I'll never get back!
I feel I've wasted enough time on this, so,
Not good is all I have to say!
Loved it, really enjoyed the absurd details and the surreal vibe.