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Quote: Tursiops @ 12th July 2014, 9:09 AM BST

Yeah, I would be interested to see where you went with it

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Here you go, Tursiops, here's ep 4: http://www.scribd.com/doc/233618833/DJR4

It's not as neatly formatted as the first one, but should be easy enough to follow.

This one's a bit more sit com-shaped than the other; or maybe I mean, farce-shaped, because it's all one continuous scene (extracts excepted)...although it's still mostly people with stupid names talking about made up books, of course.

But, it certainly has the least strange plot of any of the 6 epsidoes we drew up.

Really liked first half of first one....which I just gobbled up . Nice.

Thasnk for searching this old thread out

Really glad so many poeple liked this. My only concern is that everyone liked the bits I'm not so into, because it was created to get a lot of things out of the way as swiftly and efficiently as possible - perhaps we write better when we're concentrating on getting everything done neatly, instead of relishing the gags and situations.

Food for thought, definitely, so thanks to all of you who commented, really incredibly useful.

Quote: gappy @ 12th July 2014, 7:55 PM BST

Here you go, Tursiops, here's ep 4: http://www.scribd.com/doc/233618833/DJR4

It's not as neatly formatted as the first one, but should be easy enough to follow.

This one's a bit more sit com-shaped than the other; or maybe I mean, farce-shaped, because it's all one continuous scene (extracts excepted)...although it's still mostly people with stupid names talking about made up books, of course.

But, it certainly has the least strange plot of any of the 6 epsidoes we drew up.

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That really is a very enjoyable read.

Thanks