This is a kids rhyming short story that I wrote by accident. It was meant to be kids poem but I couldn't stop rhyming and rambling....
Mimmie McMacken meets Wolfy Peter
I liked this. If Shortened could make a cool kids book if you know (or are ) a good illustrator
I quite liked this, but my interest began to tail off after a few paragraphs. It reminded me of Nonstop Nonsense by Margaret Mahy - one of my favourite childhood books which is a mixture of nonsense rhyme and short stories.