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Mr. Writer (Who never gets around to writing)

Okay, not sure what this is yet, just started writing it? It's only three pages long so far, but I think some of you will appreciate the situation my protagonist is in.

Just want some general comments, please. Do you think it's funny, interesting?

PDF Version - http://www.leevil.co.uk/Untitled4Now.pdf

TXT. Version - http://www.leevil.co.uk/Untitled4Now.txt

Aren't I considerate? :D

Thanks.

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I really like it! I especially like the bit about the flier and the junk mail-its just SO typical! Really good, imho!

Loved it:)

Thanks Scats and Jude, have a lollipop!

Isn't that the wrong layout though?

For what?

Yep lee. Mucho Goodo.

Quote: Leevil @ September 5, 2007, 5:17 PM

For what?

A script. Isn't that the American way of laying it out?

God thats scary. Do I know you? Errr

It's certainly funny, had me chuckling throughout, except when i got up halfway through reading it to make a brew and check my emails. :S

Quote: Seefacts @ September 5, 2007, 7:39 PM

A script. Isn't that the American way of laying it out?

Yeah, it might be? I used the Half-Hour Sitcom script format in Final Draft, but it's easily changed.

Quote: jacparov @ September 5, 2007, 8:24 PM

God thats scary. Do I know you? Errr

It's certainly funny, had me chuckling throughout, except when i got up halfway through reading it to make a brew and check my emails. :S

Thanks, ironically I was doing the same thing whilst writing it.

Quote: Leevil @ September 5, 2007, 8:40 PM

Yeah, it might be? I used the Half-Hour Sitcom script format in Final Draft, but it's easily changed.

Sorry, I put the 'arse' in 'anal'.

It's okay dude, all good.

F**king bastard, tell me how to format my own scripts!

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