Power of 3...

Okay, I've finished the 1st 10 pages of a script I'm writing (I only have it in PDF). I've already sent it to Jude and got some nice feedback. Now, i was wondering are there 2 other people here that would like to read it maybe give me some feedback.

The point is, if you do this I'll read the 1st 10 pages of a script your writing, etc etc.

Any takers, who are experienced at reading or whatever?

Thanks.

p.s. I'm only doing this because I don't want to post 10 pages I'm really proud of in the crique forum. It's not like I hate any of you.

I'd do it, but I have nothing, at the moment, I'd like you to read.

I'm not a bloody charity,

Spank you Leevil and losaavedra. I'll send you an e-mail asap.

Edit: Done. Huzzah!

Edit 2: Ooops, I sent it to you anyway Leevel, lol. I really should read properly.

Hey hotz, I'm waiting on a delivery this afternoon, so send it on if you want. I'm easily distracted at the moment anyway. Will send ten pgs I wouldn't mind reviewed in return.

Lol, it better be good!

I am happy to swap things with you. We can do sketches, men or shoes.
x

lol men, he'll like that or maybe he will...

I think Hotzapper is a girlie!

hotzappa11

I'll read if you want a critique.

Dan

I'm a man and you know what, i'll send it to you both, simon and swertyd. More the merrier.

Can you send it to me again, "dude", I download the email onto my other computer, doh!

I thought hotzappa was a girl too!

Am mental.

I thought HZ was a girl too. I'll read too, if you want.

To be honest, for a long time, so did I. It's that avatar, I think?

Done. Hope it helps! hotzappa's a man?