It is boxing day and this is the first chance I have got to have some chocolates:
Christmas chocolates on Boxing day
Nice but you missed a trick
if you open the box on....no more heroes anymore
it would be a more perfect punchline
Thanks Sooty, yes there was a few ways the timing could have went I did play around with it for a bit before I settled on that one. I was not sure where to bring it in, but yes on that line worked have worked better.
I know it's just as dumb as the candle one, but I enjoyed that all the same. maybe it's just because I've heard of Heroes chocolates.
Oh yes for sure I like sillyness and this was just really silly and obvious, it was a toss up with the music though, I did have a certain Bonnie Tyler track in mind. Thanks for the feedback
Quote: Carlos Manwelly @ 28th December 2013, 5:20 PM GMTOh yes for sure I like sillyness and this was just really silly and obvious, it was a toss up with the music though, I did have a certain Bonnie Tyler track in mind. Thanks for the feedback
This track is definitely a better choice than the Tyler, even though the joke is obvisouly the same. There's something funny about the track's bouncy, simple refrains contrasting with your disappointed face.
After summing them both up I thought so as well, I agree about the bouncyness of the track and a proper actor would have done a much better job with the reaction, or maybe even my dog could have done better