Quote: Tony Cowards @ 4th May 2015, 2:43 PM BSTSorry, I hope you realise my "critique" only comes from a position of love.
You could be totally right and I understand that I may've written a different joke, that's the beauty of comedy. After all, there are certain "rules" to jokewriting but like all rules of comedy they are there to be broken.
Anyway, hope you didn't mind my comments and thank you for the kind words.
Not at all, you always have good points and at least it means someone read my joke :-) all good.