DOCTOR is talking in French to WOMAN 1 who doesn't know what he is saying. The conversation is emotional and heated. MAN 1 appears and unbuttons DOCTORs white coat to reveal a black t shirt. Now we can see the white subtitles on his black t shirt and WOMAN 1 can read them
WOMAN 1 - Thank you!
END
Really like the playing with format within the sketch, but this lacks the logic of why the set-up is occuring. If you don't want to develop the situation at least make the woman's pay-off line characterful or surprising. Nice template though, could see this as a runner.
Very neat idea almost brilliant, just would benefit from being stretched out
Also I'd have her read the subtitles slap him and storm out
Quote: sootyj @ 28th November 2013, 11:38 AM GMTVery neat idea almost brilliant, just would benefit from being stretched out
Also I'd have her read the subtitles slap him and storm out
Doctor then drops his trousers and on his black undies is written "WTF ???"
Very nice original idea.... I agree that this is worth exploring and expanding. Great piece of creative thought.
Very nice sketch simple and funny
Hi Blah Blah.
You have had lots of positive feedback on this so I don't feel too bad saying I just don't 'see' it. Are the 'subtitles' scrolling across? or fixed?
regards
playfull
Playfull. They are fixed like in foreign movies. Thanks for all the feedback I think they is more work to be done on it, but happy premise seems to be on right track