British Comedy Guide

Lay Bye Bye

We see a Little Chef on an A road

We see a rather blunt looking man eating a full English breakfast

A small, very tired looking man is putting his coat on as he comes out from behind the counter, he looks like he has done four shifts on the trot.

BLUNT MAN
Scoffs

Eh Titch, going by the size of you, you've got to be the f**king owner!

The small man smashes a chair over the blunt man's head

I think you're hoping the audience will be able to tell he's been working a long shift just from a quick glimpse of him. Perhaps build it up a bit more. The actual pun/payoff isn't that strong though. More a groaner.

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