Anew Joke!

Hi guys, would love to know if anyone thinks this is funny before I write it into my stand up.

the joke is:

I just did a sky dive for people who suffer from alopecia,
I can only describe it as "Hair raising!"

It's a good idea but somehow it feels like the jump is a little too far.

Maybe

I'm skydiving for alopecia, it's a hair raising challenge.

I think there is more to be had from it, maybe something like:

I just did a sky dive for people who suffer from alopecia,
I landed in the middle of nowhere (no hair)

Thats good Carlos but its a different joke

or

I just did a sky dive for people who suffer from alopecia.
Ironically, it was a bit hairy.

Nice

Quote: sootyj @ 11th November 2013, 10:44 PM GMT

Thats good Carlos but its a different joke

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Yes I see what you mean.

I tried to find the cause of baldness and found myself in the middle of no hair

Thanks guys, all good ideas, but I'm using sootyj's rewording as it tells the same joke but just in a better way than I did, so thanks Sootyj and everyone else.

Did I mention I just sold a single joke for a £100.....

I kid, I kid it's all yours.