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Peeps,

Please don't take offence Jennie, but I'm unlikely to be scared/deterred by one or two opinions you may have. There are far more scary things to worry about in the world. Heck, I've even seen a kangaroo try to drown a dog.... take a look for yourself. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mL63ryR_4iU

That was my first effort at trying to write a sitcom, or anything as a matter of fact. So like it or hate it, mainly hate it yes, I'll keep trying.

For the rest, don't you all worry your little socks off, I'll definitely be adding some things to the critique section soon for you all to feast on and likely destroy.

Safez

Dan

Glad you're back.

It is said so often that it's boring: "Writing is about re-writing". Even I re-wrote much of mine and I'm virtually perfect.

I would say I'm perfect, but of course I'm incredibly modest. Virtually perfectly modest in fact.