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BCC - Three's A Crowd

Who'd have funked it the first Bonus Comedy Comepetition was a three way tie. Mmm this calls for an extra specila Bonus Bonus Comedy Competition to determine who will win the virtual biscuit.

The topic will be three's a crowd.

Anyone can enter and vote but can only do either once. Good luck and congratulations to the winners of the last BCC. The virtual biscuit is so close you can virtually taste it :)

Competition will close next week. The bonus competition scoreboard is as follows:-

Pilot-2
Baumski-2
Fred Peters-2

Good Luck

Damn. I didn't read the topic and have written another TV related sketch. Sod it, I'm sure it's related to three's a crowd in some way:

EXT. STREET – DAY

TWO TELEVISIONS ARE WALKING ALONG THE ROAD CHATTING.

TELE1: So what did you get up to last night?

TELE2: Nothing much, just watched the human.

TELE1: Really? My human’s still analogue, haven’t got a digital box installed yet.

TELE2: You need to get that sorted, I just bought a new flatscreen human, state-of-the- art.

TELE1: I’ve got a wide-screen human, 28 inches.

TELE2: That’s pretty big, but my missus insisted and I went for the 32 inch.

TELE1: Why did you get a new one? I thought you were happy with your old human?

TELE2: The old one broke. Had to take it down the rubbish dump.

TELE1: What happened?

TELE2: The knob fell off.

TELE1: That happens. Especially if the kids keep fiddling with it.

TELE2: Yes, I try to tell them to stop, but they never listen.

PAUSE AS THEY WALK ALONG.

TELE1: Right, better go. I’m off to have sex with an ironing board.

TELE2: You lucky bastard.

There were three in the bed and the little one said, "MMMMMMMmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!!!"

Three in a bed and the little one said, 'I keep telling you, it's not the size that counts, it's what you do with it.'

Not new to me but new to most..

DEATH METAL IN THE AFTERNOON
EXT. DAY.A SUBURBAN CUL-DE-SAC.

A GOTH/DEATH METAL TEENAGE COUPLE ARE APPROACHING THE HOUSE OF THE BOY’S FATHER.

Girl:
So what’s your dad like?

Boy:
He’s like, weeeell square. Don’t ask him about music or anything.

Girl:
I bet he’ll be like reeeeeally shocked at the music we’re into

Boy:
Oh, totally.

HE OPENS THE DOOR. THEY GO IN AND DAD IS SITIING ON THE COUCH READING THE PAPER IN HIS SLIPPERS AND CARDIGAN.

Dad:
Hello, so you must be Rachel – pleased to meet you. Glad Steven’s got himself a fellow ‘heavy rocker’.

THE TEENAGERS GIGGLE.

Dad:
It’s all heavy rock, this gothic, dark stuff. You may think these bands are shocking but I’m unshockable. Go on, which bands do you like?

Girl:
Er, Christ Fist and Bleeding Corpse Cock, what else Steven?

Dad:
That’s just like Black Sabbath in my day -

Boy:
Er, Suicide Bummer, Kill The Old, Menstrual Gargle.

Dad:
Right. Let’s see if my new music can shock you!

Boy:
Your new music?

Dad:
I’m starting up my own band. It’s called Faeces for My Foetus. I’ll go and get changed.

THE TEENAGERS GIGGLE AND SIT CLOSE TOGETHER ON THE COUCH.

Boy:
This is gonna be weeeell embarrassing.

CAPTION: 5 MINUTES LATER.
DAD COMES DOWNSTAIRS WITH A GUITAR AND AMP. HE IS DRESSED IN EXACTLY THE SAME CLOTHES BUT THEY HAVE BEEN CUT UP AND SPRAYED IN SILLY STRING. HE HAS SMEARED LIPSTICK ALL OVER HIS FACE AND PAINTED HIS NOSE BLUE. HE PLUGS IN THE GUITAR AND STARTS THRASHING IT, WITHOUT FORMING CHORDS. HE STARTS SINGING IN A SATANIC, GUTTURAL TONE:

Dad:
Can it be you fellatin’ satan?
Where’s my kids I goddam ate ‘em –

CUT TO THE KIDS LOOKING BEYOND DISTURBED AS HE THRASHES A MINOR POWER CHORD

Dad:
Bum Mother Theresa
Bleeding anus
Your mum was a phlid
Her rotting flesh would shame us..

DAD THEN REACHES DOWN THE BACK OF HIS TROUSERS. HE PULLS OUT SOME OF HIS OWN FAECES AND HURLS IT AT THE YOUNG COUPLE. HE STARTS HEADBUTTING A NEARBY BISCUIT TIN. CLOSE UP OF DAD CHOMPING WHOLE RAW EGGS.

THE KIDS FLEE THE HOUSE. AND DAD CAN BE SEEN PRESSING HIS NOW BLOOD-SODDEN FACE AGAINST THE WINDOW, MAKING DEEP, INFERNAL SOUNDS. CUT TO THE TEENAGERS RUNNING UP THE CUL-DE-SAC AS A DISTANT SIREN WAILS.

FADE

Another corker Fred! Pissed my sides when he headbutted the biscuit tin. The song lyrics were also pretty choice. Not to mention the blue nose.

Fred Peters wins!

Not a GG Allen fan by any chance?

Haha! GG Allin was definitely an inspiration!

Fred, I do hope this isn't an insight to your life or upbringing if so, don't invite me over for xmas dinner.

Paul, it's completely autobiographical!

My mind is a bullet, my voice is a machine gun, the audience is the target!

Is that right..?

That's what the man said!
See more (but don't watch in work unless you are a roadie for a living) http://youtube.com/watch?v=G2SXpyAIyXw

INT. PLAIN ROOM – DAY.

TWO PEOPLE (JACOB AND EMILY) ARE SECRETLY DISCUSSING THEIR FRIENDS BEHAVIOUR. (MEDIUM SHOT)

JACOB:
Mikey has been really funny the last few days.

EMILY:
I know, he’s been so moody…

JACOB:
He can be so annoying at times

EMILY:
At times?

JACOB:
Okay, okay…all the time! I know what you mean though, I sometimes wish he would just go away…

EMILY:
Shh, I think he’s coming!

THE DOOR OPENS AND JACOB AND EMILY MOVE TO ALLOW THE DOOR TO OPEN. MIKEY STICKS HIS HEAD ROUND THE DOOR AND SAYS, ANGRILY;

MIKEY:
Oh, hello.

MIKEY SHUFFLES IN AND NOW THE THREE OF THEM ARE QUITE CLOSE, FACING EACH OTHER. THERE IS AN AWKWARD SILENCE. AS THE OTHER TWO LOOK AROUND, JACOB LOOKS IN HIS POCKET AND TAKES OUT A PIN. HE LOOKS AT IT INTENTLY, THEN FUMBLES AS HE DROPS IT. AS THE PIN DROPS THERE’S A LOUD WHISTLING NOISE AND A ‘BOOM’ AS IT HITS THE FLOOR. THERE IS ANOTHER PAUSE.

EMILY:
Sooooo…

JACOB:
Have you heard? The theme for the BSGs new competition is ‘Three’s a crowd’!

REVERSE ZOOM TO A WIDE SHOT - JACOB, EMILY AND MIKEY ARE IN A TINY ROOM, SQUASHED TOGETHER.

EMILY:
That’s ridiculous!

MIKEY:
I know! There’s no way three can ever be a crowd!

Rushed and Improvised

George and Rosie are walking down the street, arm in arm, and alongside them is their friend, Tim.

Tim: Are you sure you don't mind me being with you guys?

George: Oh, no, that's cool Tim.

Rosie: Don't mind at all.

Tim: Well, I'd hate to think that I was intruding on your privacy. It does feel a little awkward being with a couple.

George: No worries, really, we like you being here.

Rosie: Seriously.

Tim: Well, I'll just go and grab a coffee if you want a chat.

F/O

We are now in a hotel room. Rosie and George are on the bed, indulging in the wonderful traditions of the wedding night. The camera pans out to see Tim lounging in an armvchair and watching the television.

Tim: Are you sure you don't mind me being here guys?

George: No, it's cool, honestly.

Rosie: We like having you here.

George: Tell us to keep it down if you can't hear the tele.

Competition closed. Time to vote

Simon Stratton playing with his ironing board.

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