These two deserve far more views than they've currently got!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bPjbQNAE9Vw
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Biscuit and Brawn: hilarious female double-act
Are we still doing the stumblies?
Actually with some editing and some direction it could be good. Just a bit overlong and self knowing in places.
Watched a few. Some very well written & delivered lines, both smart & funny. Works best when in sketch/character mode.
But...
As yourselves and laughing at your own comments - It did come across a bit 'look at us aren't we clever' and it did make me like you a little less.
But...
Overall some very good, very funny ideas intelligently presented.
I can't say I warmed to the pair of you - probably due to the "look at us aren't we clever" that Playfull mentioned. But there are some good ideas in there.
Why have you filmed yourself both speaking to camera? Use the interview technique. This will allow you to use cutaways to disguise the jumps in the editing.
A couple of the jokes were smile-worthy but the whole thing is 50% too long.
I think your stage name is weak. People will look for a joke there and there is none. You also need to synchronise your look. Brawn's alternative look is great but Biscuit looks like a Christian nutter.
You've got some good idea but its stagy whilst trying to be natural.
And your rule of 3 gags, felt like they were plucked fro,"rule of 3 gags for the easily startled"
I think work on loosening up a bit and have your jokes take you in the direction.
And agreeing with Godot the straight to camera stuff kinda kills the tension.
What about Biscuit and Barrel?
What about it?
It's a cracker!