hahaha well its something that has always been on me mind to do. I am constantly on a diet andthat's why I turned this in to an over the top real life comedy.
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Zumba - "you still owe me for that" - made me smile.[/quote]
Made me laugh too - brilliant.
I liked the beginning, and thought it was going to be really good. But then it just carried on being about a woman who couldn't work a video camera.
It was very well acted.. on the verge of thinking...Is this real ? I really loved the mums laugh.
But, yeah, could do with a couple more good lines and chopped down to at least half the time, getting rid of some of the zooming in and out, which got a bit annoying quite quickly.
Would definitely like to see more.
What they said: excellent, natural performances, you just need to write some jokes.
Zumba and chicken punching were funny, but we had to wait a long time to get there.
http://youtu.be/AdNUGM_ZkDM my comedy webseries following the intro u guys see. thoughts? x
The acting is brilliant from you and mother and the subject is well worth having fun with. For a YouTube audience I think it is to long or another way of looking at it is there are not enough laughs in between the story, though for a real life drama/comedy it is fine as it is.
As a note I would have opened episode 3 with you lighting your fag with the candle 40 seconds in, it's a good visual to set us off
Wow thanku for this comment, really appreciate it and will take on everything u said.