British Comedy Guide

Tigerfeet, my sitcom, first draft Page 2

The trouble with doing a sit com called tigerfeet is you will get a lot of people saying: that's wrong, that's wrong, that's wrong and that's wrong,

when they should be saying:

"That's right, that's right, that's right, that's right!" :)

Find a way to use that line its very good

Quote: Jaicee @ August 9 2013, 6:57 PM BST

A younger guy who's become obsessed by the decade that taste forgot for some reason ie. he's a comedy oddball, could be more interesting.

I agree with this. An man reminiscing about his youth is fine, a young man who is inexplicably obsessed with Mud is far more interesting. I'd need to read more to make a critical decision beyond this, though.

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