> Huge explosion destroys the universe.
and how pray, dear fellow, do you expect to indicate in a sound effect that the whole universe is destroyed...
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Yeah, I know.. that's not the writers job, leave that for the techies to do.
Another 2525 script from SootyJ Page 2
Missed this the first time round Sootyj.
Great little idea. Really liked the premise.
I really like that. Very good idea and you've nicely rinsed the joke without overdoing it. I think the scifi stuff is perfect, not too much. I suppose you could alude to a minority report feel if filmed which would set the scene for most people.
Thanks all, Bill Will you're dead right but I think I did enough policeman schtick with PC Ivor Truncheon.
And yes Danphobic it was very much inspired by Minority Report.
I liked this too. Stands out from the other sci-fi sketches. A point I would make would be the exposition of the characters entrances take me out of the sketch. Maybe when police man enters he's talking on radio announcing his arrival? Just as a break from the "oh look it's..." style. Liked it all in all though
>MARCUS Hello Marcus temporal causality enforcement, I heard you weren't planning on having a bath. Even a slight change to the ordered nature of events can lead to the destruction of universe as we know it.
The bath causuality does quite come through in this sentence it needs rewording to something like:
MARCUS
Hello I am Marcus from temporal causality enforcement, We saw you change your mind about having a bath. We have to warn you that even a slight change to the ordered nature of events, this late, can lead to the destruction of universe as we know it.
I liked it, too. Presumably Matt Lucas didn't, though?