Hey guys I really need help, I am trying to improve my stand up comedy act, and I just made a YouTube channel and put my first video up, I made another post about this, and I am looking for some criticism, I will tell you what I have already been told.
-Speak louder, and more clearly.
-Say things so that people understand them better.
-Make the jokes quicker like one-two, with more energetic joke telling.
Please all are welcome to help, thank you so much in advance.
