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Will you get our ball for us mister Page 3

Forgive me if this sounds patronising, Carlos, but you are noticeably improving.

Quote: Jennie @ August 7 2013, 4:49 PM BST

Forgive me if this sounds patronising, Carlos, but you are noticeably improving.

Thank you Jennie, and no it doesn't sound patronising at all. I think it is down to this forum and the wealth of knowledge from everyone here. It is a great place to throw out ideas and soak in the feedback.

Thank you

I like what I like I can do no more than that.

Quote: playfull @ August 6 2013, 8:47 PM BST

I think it is a top hat.

That made me laugh.

The sketch could be a nice runner, good idea, although for me personally it needs something more to make it a 'funny' rather than a good idea.

Quote: AJGO @ August 7 2013, 6:47 PM BST

That made me laugh.

The sketch could be a nice runner, good idea, although for me personally it needs something more to make it a 'funny' rather than a good idea.

Thanks AJGO, I am sure there is something more to it as well.

Funny one Carlos. Could be interesting if you pushed it even further to make the mans troubles bigger so the the punchline would be stronger.

Good luck with the filming Carlos. It's good to make things.

http://www.videobash.com/video_show/25-angry-dogs-attack-a-biker-in-greece-542123

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