I received feedback the other day that the last sketch in this video, pulled the viewer out of the immersion that this was a TV show. To quote "The whole thing felt like it was a TV show, then when you get to the last sketch it just ruins it"
Making it look like a TV show wasn't my intent, I'm always considering ways to manipulate the platform I'm currently posting to which is YouTube.
If you could watch the show, baring the information I have presented and then provide feedback please.
I quite liked some of it - you're obviously a natural performer and you've got some good ideas. I can't say that the last part ruined it for me.
The funniest bit for me was the "talking to children" segment. That little girl is brilliant.
It looks a bit odd that 47k views have only produced 15 likes/dislikes. Back to odesk (or wherever).
Quote: stonked @ August 2 2013, 10:09 PM BSTI quite liked some of it - you're obviously a natural performer and you've got some good ideas. I can't say that the last part ruined it for me.
The funniest bit for me was the "talking to children" segment. That little girl is brilliant.
It looks a bit odd that 47k views have only produced 15 likes/dislikes. Back to odesk (or wherever).
Thanks for such lovely comments.
The talking to children segment has been a lot of people's favourite sketch. I'm glad the last part never ruined it for you, otherwise I would of had to mess with the format a bit.
I seen this add for some SEO backlink thing and it said produced good results for your YouTube videos, it was only £3 so I purchased thinking I'd get more people directed to my video. Well I must say it did work but it annoys me that these aren't human views, obviously or else they would have liked, commented or subscribed. *sigh*
Never touching those things again!
Quote: Cameron Nicolson @ August 2 2013, 10:25 PM BSTI seen this add for some SEO backlink thing and it said produced good results for your YouTube videos, it was only £3 so I purchased thinking I'd get more people directed to my video. Well I must say it did work but it annoys me that these aren't human views, obviously or else they would have liked, commented or subscribed. *sigh*
Never touching those things again!
Best thing - I don't think you need that sort of "help".
Just been looking at some more of your stuff and this one really had me grinning.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pQtnGxPNyUY
That's clever.
Quote: stonked @ August 2 2013, 10:46 PM BSTBest thing - I don't think you need that sort of "help".
Just been looking at some more of your stuff and this one really had me grinning.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pQtnGxPNyUY
That's clever.
Yeah, you're right. It's just so difficult getting yourself out there and noticed.
Haha, forgot about that one. 
You're taking a chance putting a question like that here ,Cameron.I was expecting a load of yesses here.You know best what works.It's your material.But be crueller with yourself than anyone else would be.