Step Forward

WARNING: THIS IS NOT FUNNY!

Sorry, would love to post something funny I've written but I haven't got anything so hope you'll give me a pass on this...

Step Forward is a 2 minute Steampunk-ish time-travel adventure I've written which is entered in this year's Virgin Media Shorts competition.

Would LOVE your feedback on this and know I can trust youse guys to be honest...

http://www.virginmediashorts.co.uk/film/5093/step-forward#.UfLYPaWfe8q

(Oh and if you do like it there's a twitter vote going on this week. Just sayin')

Martyn

Very impressed. Cleaver idea, very well produced.

Whilst not strictly funny it did make me smile, which is good enough for me.

regards

playfull

Hi playfull, many thanks for your kind feedback and for taking the time to check it out.

Cheers!

Martyn

Very good indeed.Would make a great kid's series.

Thanks for taking the time to watch Jaicee and for your kind words - would LOVE to develop this idea and these characters into a TV series. Am actually at the moment writing an outline for a feature film which follows on from this story.

Early days...

Martyn