First gig videoed - could you critique por favour Page 2

Thank you very much, guys

thanks for the points re slowing delivery - a lot have said it and it's something that needs to be sorted. Interesting note re, staying on one topic too OTTY - I guess that's a good point because it'll make me write more about one topic rather than shoehorning segues in.

I've got a few other ideas going, both of which are quite far removed from the set I did, so will let you know.

thanks again.

I always give top credit to anyone who dare go on stage to be a comic with their own material. (tried it once - couldn't stop my knees knocking)
Over the next few gigs your adrenalin levels might come down to a workable level where you can slow down a little and enunciate more clearly.
I liked what I could understand and hear.