Is it just me that see's the irony of the posters title. Self Defence 
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Teddy, I don't know what is going on between personalities on here, and although I find this forum a great place to get critique, I have noticed there is also a lot of hate going on in here, and sneaky comments in disguise, but having said that I use a lot of forums mainly technical ones and it is the same in them people like to have a go. My advice let it go over your head. And as someone posted earlier your sketch writing is improving.