British Comedy Guide

Quick Sketch-Feedback would be appreciated :)

Adult studio set-Upper class female receiving her first call as a chat show worker.

Set Manager
"Right then Lindsay, you know the score with this business a bit of boobie jiggling and ooooh baby give it to me"

Lindsay
"Excuse me"
Set Manager
"And we go live in three, two, one.
(gestures to pick up phone)
Caller
"Alright gorgeus what are you wearing?"
Lindsay
"Well I'm wearing a rather lovely fleece from mark's peruna range and a pair of chino's"
Caller
"YOU FILTHLY SLAG!"
Lindsay
"How very dare you, I've heard about your kind in the daily mail you know"
(Hears slapping noises)
Lindsay
"That better be a leg of lamb your tenderising"
Set Manager
"Cut!"

I like the idea of an upper class lady being put into settings outside her normal world. However, the laughs in here aren't very original and there's not much to the sketch. Maybe it could work as a Viz comic strip sort of thing, but I think you need to get some better dialogue in there.

Thanks man,appreciate the feedback : )

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