Excellent work - really good.
More than a cut above the usual self-indulgent or downright hopeless stuff we see on here.
Do you work on your own, or as part of a team?
I say this, because the only criticism I could level at it is that it sometimes feels you could do with some right c**t whispering in your ear "Is this bit as funny as the last bit?" or "Is this going on a bit too long?".
Some scenes - inside the restaurant with his sister and parents springs to mind - felt like they dragged a little.
The trouble is, you've taken this to such a pro level, that to judge it at anything less than pro level would do you no favours.
Having said that I think you've done more than enough to get interest from this, and once you do and you get a producer attached they'll be down on you like a ton of bricks anyway.
A ton of luck with this - do keep us informed as to it's progress, so that we can tell out grandchildren we were there at the beginning!