Just entered BBC new comedy award.
Stand Up material
Work on the criminal big brother. It has great potential. Loved the idea when you first mentioned it but I thought the gags were poor and too long winded to get to.
Don't be afraid to ask for one liners in critique here on your topic of criminal big brother. people here can't resist having a go.
Applause as always for having the bottle - and as I say, you might have a killer routine in the making with criminal big brother
you could also end the "deal or no deal" quicker with:
I can only count up to 20 which is both a sob story and an automatic no entry