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Help get my characters into conflict?

Hi Everyone
I'm attempting to write a sitcom where the main character has Cerebral Palsy.
It's the story of this chap attempting to make the most of all of life's opportunities who is quite capable of attaining these things but is constantly frustrated and held back, not by his own disability but by the attitudes and perception his well-intentioned friends and other characters!....obviously with hilarious consequences! (hopefully??).

However I'm having problems realising the conflicts and possible interactions between my characters, so if anyone can throw me some suggestions or ideas that would be most helpful.

Character:

Gary: Cerebral palsy. Wheelchair bound. lives in sheltered accommodation. Wants to do outrageous things like sky diving, being arrested that sort of thing but is secretly afraid. Sarcastic. Uses his disability to his advantage. Bravado.

Ged: His friend who is always popping round. Up for anything. Outgoing. Blunt. Walter mitty type, tries too hard, and fancies Carol.

Carol: Gary's carer who is around most days. Dipsy type who can't really understand Gary when he talks. Slightly patronising. Never does anything properly resulting in danger (chip pan etc. etc.).

Zed: The doorman on the intercom (lifeline). Possibly the handyman too? Slow as a result of Drink or Drugs (we don't know which). Often confused.

Gary's mum and dad: mollycoddles in the extreme, treat him like a child.

(I think that's what they all should be like but am open to modifications of character type to facilitate the conflicts etc.)

Thanking all of your good selves in anticipation.

If you want conflict, you need a character who wants to actively stop Gary from fulfilling his potential. So include a bitter social worker, for example, or an NHS manager obsessed with his or her quotas.

He could have a support group for the handicapped that he visits and many embarrasing and conflicting personalities could arise from that.

in a quirky twist, he could also, be the victim of a security officer at a local supermarket who has it in for him, believing him to be hiding stolen goods under his bumbum. shopping trips could make it a nightmare as the officer won't leave him alone.

As Beaky says, you want to think about what is stopping Gary being who he wants to be, and mould your characters around that. Who would provide the greatest obstacle for this? From your bios, it seems that Gary is motivated by fear. He believes that his disability is holding him back, when it is actually his own fear of the unknown.

So why not develop some characters who drive that home for Gary? The molly cuddling parents is a good angle - he could claim to hate their interference, but secretly rely on it as a buffer from the outside world. Ditto the carer. Maybe you could develop a character that is all Gary wants to be - someone who doesn't let their disabilities stop them living life to the full. This is guaranteed to wind Gary up (like Neil does to David Brent).

Another point - being disabled is not a character flaw. I don't say that to be PC - what is interesting about Gary is not his disability, but the person he is and how he reacts to the obstacles in his life.

Good luck!

Thank you people!

Thats got my thought processes moving in the right direction.

Will post a bit here when I get going.

Thanks again!

i'm not sure about Gary being sarcastic. I could see him being dry witted though

Well none of them are really in conflict with each other so you're not going to have much conflict.

Probably the simplest one is Steptoe and Son.

Harold wants to leave home and better himself.
His dad wants him to stay behind and thinks he can't better himself

Harold see's himself as being better than his dad, his dad knows he isn't.

Or the inbetweeners where literally every character looks down on the others and feels superior to them.

So what's Ged and Gary's falling out over?

Ok here's some.

Gary is worried if Ged is enough of a pest Clare won't support him anymore and he likes her. Gary is also jealous that if Ged gets it on with Gary he'll be the 3rd wheel.

Ged is jealous of Gary. Gary's got the girl of Ged's dreams, he's got his own home and his own home etc.

Quote: NTDodd @ June 6 2013, 10:54 AM BST

i'm not sure about Gary being sarcastic. I could see him being dry witted though

My original inspiration for this character was Laurence Clarke and his humour is quite cruel and sarcastic. http://www.laurenceclark.co.uk/clips/

...and when I see Ged I can't help but think of Kieth Chegwin?

At first sight I thought you said "When I see God I think of Keith Chegwin"

Quote: beaky @ June 6 2013, 3:17 PM BST

At first sight I thought you said "When I see God I think of Keith Chegwin"

When I see Keith Chegwin I think "God!"...

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